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lover's pain
Contributed by
fayeelizibeth
on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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shadows are my only comfort
darkness gives me needed warmth
pain sweeter than lover's pleasure
torture helps me see my worth
break me, take me, make me yours
(freedom's only found in chains)
the only way that i can love is-
is to feel this: lover's pain
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2003-01-29 19:00:00]
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Re: lover's pain
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by kegs04 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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wow, i really like this one, great write short and sweet, but i love the meaning in it-- good job
~peace |
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Re: lover's pain
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:01:12 PM AEST
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| So much meaning in this short peice,I liked this! Christina |
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Re: lover's pain
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by fancyface4898 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:12:37 PM AEST
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| very nice write. I like it |
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