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If The Day
Contributed by
wizard
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:32:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If the day could hold a dream
Or a beating heart of gold,
For you that dream would be dreamt
And love the heart would hold.
If the morning dew could speak
It would say the sun has cried,
For when the twilight falls my love,
Of you it will be denied.
And the midday sun would damn the clouds
As they impede your flawless view;
Of all the things it encounters,
There are none as pure as you.
If the setting sun could bid adieu
It would kiss you with a beam,
While asleep in its midnight peace
You’d stroll within its dream.
If the sparkling moonlit sky
Could realign the stars,
The constellation Love would be seen;
And it would be solely ours.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2006-03-06 20:32:02]
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Re: If The Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:06:48 PM AEST
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This is positively breathtaking! One of the most beautiful and
resplendent writes I've been witness to. I would love to point
out which stanza in particular captured my breath, but I would
then be forced to copy and paste the whole dazzling composition!
[But I will say, that last stanza is perfection, dear Paul! ]
Simply exquisite!
*loves this*
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Re: If The Day
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:31:44 PM AEST
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Paul..
People of talent are far more abundant than is supposed.
In fact, to appreciate, thouroughly the work of what we call genius,
is to possess all by which the work was produced.
Incredibili industria
Forever-
Billy
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Re: If The Day
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:55:41 PM AEST
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Paul, this is truly breath taking.
The imagery here is a thing of beauty.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece.
~Shannon |
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Re: If The Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 07:55:45 AM AEST
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Verry beautiful in deed, colors of love straight from the pallet heart. A most lovely work.
Ben |
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Re: If The Day
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by freespirit on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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great poem I have enjoyed reading
all your work
you are truly blessed a pleasure to read your poems
freespirt
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Re: If The Day
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by Aquarius01 on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 06:49:55 PM AEST
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| Such a loving write, filled with hopeful dreams of an endless and undying love. Just wonderful...Gloria E. |
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Re: If The Day
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 10:45:07 PM AEST
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Talk about romantic!!!! That is a swoon-worthy piece of poetry there my friend! I really like the creativity in this one. Glad I stumbled across this particular write!
Scorp. |
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Re: If The Day
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 06:43:32 PM AEST
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wow this poem is breathtaking!
it runs so smoothly
this is a poem i wont alow myself to forget
catz |
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Re: If The Day
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by catz77 on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 06:43:41 PM AEST
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wow this poem is breathtaking!
it runs so smoothly
this is a poem i wont allow myself to forget
catz |
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