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Postulation on Homosapien
Contributed by
Lancaster
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:28:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You’re no better then I
No safer then she
Nor lighter then the sky
You’re no smarter then I
No stronger then them
Nor braver in disguise
You’re no prettier then her
No richer then she
Nor beautiful by any demise
You’re no shriller then he
No more of a killer then me
Nor wiser in your mind
You’re no more human then it
No deeper then pits,
Nor heavier if you learned to fly
You’re no safer then us
A secret to dust
Nor alive if you could die
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Lancaster
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2006-03-06 20:28:42]
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Re: Postulation on Homosapien
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by remote on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 02:00:16 AM AEST
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"Nor alive if you could die"
You are alive till you are dead,
If you look at everything from the other perspective, you are no worst than 'her', 'others', 'them'. You are perhaps exactly like them/us(alive). |
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Re: Postulation on Homosapien
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:45:17 PM AEST
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What a unique flow...one I've had the lesser pleasure of.
Baleful and blight-
truly an equisite write.. my favorite lines:
"You’re no safer then us
A secret to dust
Nor alive if you could die"
I'd have posted this under 'vengance' as it were.
5 from me.
Billy
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