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Black Cat
Contributed by
eggflipper
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:49:06 PM in AEST
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A black cat crossed his path
where a leaf had fallen from a tree.
O how he feared this little leaf
and all it would begat.
It signalled the winds of change
to begin her assault on life.
A fish swam by
through the light that reflected off the water,
he fell in love,
and it replenished his belief
that spring would come once again.
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Re: Black Cat
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by thesinner on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 09:29:58 PM AEST
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Re: Black Cat
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 12:29:45 AM AEST
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There's a lot woven into this short work, and I like the fact that you don't seem overly concerned with exposing your message, thus letting it emerge gracefully on its own. I especially like the lines
It signalled the winds of change
to begin her assault on life.
A powerful way of putting it. Excellent work.
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