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I Have Never Seen A Rose
Contributed by
Drapes
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Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 06:49:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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have never seen a rose
From first person point of view.
I have never smelled a rose,
Neither elderly nor new.
I have never heard a rose
Sing its lovely melodies.
I have never tasted a rose,
They say it's candy to a baby.
I have never felt a rose,
Too fragile for my touch.
For I have never seen a rose,
A rose is just too much.
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Drapes
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2006-03-06 18:49:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Have Never Seen A Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by mischild on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 06:55:18 PM AEST (User
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It makes since to me . |
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Re: I Have Never Seen A Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 07:09:23 PM AEST (User
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I am not exactly sure what you are trying to say with this poem, but it sure sounds great. I like the flow and rhythm of it. If you're bored, hit me up at:
http://www.myspace.com/kellymagovern
I like creative types of people. Late. |
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Re: I Have Never Seen A Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST (User
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Wow. That really touched me
I don't know what it's supposed to mean for you
because i know that i like to make my poems diverse so all people can relate to them in one way or another.
but this reminds me of my girlfriend
who died 2 years ago.
this poem made me happy
but sad
thanks for thinking to write such an inspiring poem. |
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