|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
I'm losing my mind
Contributed by
Tacosalad
on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 02:43:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
I'm losing my sight,
I'm losing my mind,
I'm losing my life!
If you take me,
Please dont break me,
And shove me out.
Olny to find my own madness,
way beoned happyness and sadness.
You've hurt me once befor,
And now even more!
I'm still addicted to your craze,
And now more than ever,
I'm waiting on destaster!
You've done went insane,
down to every vein.
Just to cause me pain
And olny for your gain.
~*~*~*Not done*~*~*~
Copyright ©
Tacosalad
... [
2006-03-06 14:43:24]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: I'm losing my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Solmyr1404 on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 03:00:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very interesting....but you do have one up on me....i never had a mind to lose.... |
|
|
Re: I'm losing my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 11:43:02 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Interesting work. Use a spellcheck.
Keep writing.
Andrew |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
