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They don't care
Contributed by
M
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Why don't they hear me?
I stand here,
Screaming what i feel,
Screaming at them,
Wanting them to hear,
Wanting them to listen,
Wanting them to know,
But they don't care.
Why can't they see me?
I walk around,
With cuts on my hands,
And pain on my face,
Wanting them to look,
Wanting them to see,
Wanting them to understand,
But they don't care.
Why do they remember me?
They talk to my gravestone,
Asking why things went wrong,
Crying over it all,
Wanting to know why they didn't hear or listen,
Wanting to know why they didn't look or see,
Wanting to know why they didn't know or understand,
NOW they care.
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M
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2003-01-29 17:20:00]
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Re: They don't care
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 06:23:23 PM AEST
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M So very sad,I hope things will be better soon for you dont loose hope! Great touching peice!
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Re: They don't care
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by cryingonmyporch on
Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:06:10 AM AEST
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M that is so very sad but a lot of the time this is how it happens. My mom and me don't have a relationship. Well a give take relationship I give and she takes. As you'll find in all my poetry all of it is so very true. My friend Chantel can tell you we live in the same town and we have held eachother when we can't see the end of the tunnel. She and the voice are what have kept what little bit I am but, sane. Anyways. I enjoyed this one.. And I'm so Sorry!
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Re: They don't care
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 02:55:06 PM AEST
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This was very vivid and real for me I enjoyed this you express your feelings really well. I have asked the same questions u have and I am sure you will find the answers soon.
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