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Life's Sudden Change
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 11:37:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Life's Sudden Change
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I can never get use to life's sudden change
The pieces of the puzzle getting rearranged
Life's direction turned upside down
One minute living, the next underground
People taken from us before their time
Making no sense, reason, or rhyme
Why do the good ones always go first?
When there are so many seemingly worse
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Someone explain, for I fail to understand
The senseless death of another good man
I know that death is a part of life
And no one is immune, not husband or wife
But the pain is so hard to bear
When you lose someone for whom you care
Lord forgive me for these words of doubt
I’m just painfully trying to figure this out
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2006-03-06 11:37:01]
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Re: Life's Sudden Change
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by Kano on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 11:53:02 AM AEST
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| Nice poem from the heart, sorry for your loss. |
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Re: Life's Sudden Change
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by Brasco on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 01:19:44 PM AEST
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| I think this is something we all struggle with and sometimes questions don’t have answers. I liked the way you put these thoughts into words. |
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Re: Life's Sudden Change
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 03:54:04 PM AEST
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| well done, you expressed yourself well in this poem. |
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Re: Life's Sudden Change
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 02:46:08 PM AEST
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You have a gift of taking something we all feel on various levels, and putting it all together in a way that makes so much sense. Great poem!
Jennifer |
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