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The Song on the Radio
Contributed by
moses
on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 07:32:34 PM in AEST
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Lyrical genius plays on the radio,
as I drift to places years ago.
Sometimes thinking can be the curse,
the memories of it all, make it worse.
As sweet melodic voices sing the next verse,
I reminisce on how it all used to be.
Now I find the same bliss when I hold you so close to me.
We lie together so spent and content.
Creating memories for our future selves.
So they too can build up dust like the old books on our shelves.
My heart you held, it is still yours to crush.
I am still waiting for that day to come.
The colors all bleed into one,
as the rest of the gentle song is sung over the radio.
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-03-05 19:32:34]
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Re: The Song on the Radio
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 11:05:08 PM AEST
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Is it not amazing how a song can bring back memories. Some happy, some sad. Your poem is beautifully written, a poem to read with and to reminisce of those special times we had in the past.
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Re: The Song on the Radio
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by themonk on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 07:54:12 PM AEST
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great work man, your capturing the heart of many readers, bles you fir that man, keep it up, cuz i know you will.
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Re: The Song on the Radio
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by themonk on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 07:54:12 PM AEST
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great work man, your capturing the heart of many readers, bles you fir that man, keep it up, cuz i know you will.
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Re: The Song on the Radio
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:20:40 PM AEST
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~*Moses*~
More people ought to read and comment on ur work. You are a remarkable and talented poet. Each time I visit ur pages I'm always impressed with its contents. You have alot going for u my dear friend. Keep up the awesome work.
*love n hugs from ur fan/friend*
~*sue*~ |
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