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Feathers are Falling
Contributed by
xFalling_of_Starsx
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Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 03:55:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Feathers are falling tonight
Fast like gleaming snow
The streets are silent tonight
Heaven's eyes have seen a new low
Steps have been climbed on this night
Rushed by long-sleeping tears
The Sea brings no tide on the evening
The stars hold back from our fears
The moon was found mourning this nightfall
The clouds were slow dancing in shows
The sun will not touch these hours
No one speaks of what time already knows
DAR/7/25/02
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by ginsdance on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 04:04:51 PM AEST (User
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wow.... that's all I can say. Another great write!
*ginsdance* |
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Suzy on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:36:30 PM AEST (User
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wow this is a wonderful poem as is the other you have posted..can't wait to read more from you...
~~~Lasca~~~ |
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 12:35:22 AM AEST (User
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Nice write!, I'll be looking for more |
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by orgygirl on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 03:02:07 AM AEST (User
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You've outdone yourself again nika! But you already know how I feel about this poem ;)
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by Chrissie on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 02:36:19 AM AEST (User
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This is beautiful! Another wonderful piece...I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Chrissie
Thankyou for your kind comment on " Silence" |
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Re: Feathers are Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:20:37 PM AEST (User
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beautiful............... |
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