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The Book of Life Part IV
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 07:09:31 PM in AEST
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Into the temples door I go
What is next I do not know
For I am just Lyscia the meek
I am now taking on a great feat
Here there is no one left behind
I am alone in this I must remind
On through the corridors I roam
Looking for the answers to save my home
Fear beats hard and fast within my breast
I want to run but guilt would not let me rest
Farther within the structure I go
To where only the Priest and Prophets know
How this trial is to be
And what is expected of me
Finally I reach the golden door
If I enter I may exist no more
Hard it is for me to move
But I must strong prove
At last the door starts to budge
Leaving on the floor a nasty smudge
It is dark this narrow path
No light and dusty I want a bath
But go on I now must
I will not betray my peoples trust
Strong is what you will read of me
In the book
Of
Life
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-03-05 19:09:31]
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Re: The Book of Life Part IV
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by eggflipper on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 07:44:28 PM AEST
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| I applaud your confidence. This is well written and the subject matter touches my heart. I am glad you made reference to entering and existing no more. This is true on many levels. Great Job on an ambitious tale. |
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Re: The Book of Life Part IV
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by thesinner on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 07:44:30 PM AEST
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| looking forward to the next entry. Let the journey continue. |
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Re: The Book of Life Part IV
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 11:01:32 PM AEST
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Lovely. Keep writing these stories, these are great.
Yes let us all walk in His Light, lets all win this race together.
RaquelLeah who is waiting for more of this most interesting story. thank you my friend. |
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Re: The Book of Life Part IV
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 08:06:21 AM AEST
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As I look forward to the next chapter, I visualize what will happen next
Also thinking this all should be posted to the story board when complete
Mike |
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