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Fly Free
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
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Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 05:43:59 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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I pity the people who ponder and ask,
"What is the meaning of life?
What's the purpose to love and death,
All the money, poverty, and strife?"
But come, darling, answer me this,
Would it matter if there was really a point?
Would you have lived differently, changed your ways,
Or refrained from smoking that last joint?
Does it make you feel any better,
To think that for each of us there is a fate?
Oh hon, does it reassure your naive mind,
That things will get better if you wait?
Do you enjoy the thought of being played,
Like a character in some video game,
So when--God forbid--anything goes wrong,
You've got somebody to blame?
But come, i've got an idea,
Just live, darling, don't think so much,
Instead of wishing for beautiful things,
Go out and see them,
you haven't yet lost your sense of touch
Don't ask if you belong,
There's nothing to tie you in one place,
Because oh darling whatever you do,
Don't you ever lose your face,
Don't you ever fall from grace
Child, that's enough wondering,
If this is how everything was meant to be,
There's no joke, no riddle, no angel or
Devil holding you back--
Because you, my darling, can fly free
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drtylilsecret
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Re: Fly Free
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by eggflipper on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 05:58:15 PM AEST
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You have written a very fine piece here. Though I would disagree with the content.
Very good work |
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Re: Fly Free
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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| lol, well ya, that's what i meant by calling myself a hypocrite, that on some level i disagree with what i wrote too. |
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Re: Fly Free
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by mindset on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 06:48:38 PM AEST
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| :) |
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Re: Fly Free
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:04:31 PM AEST
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wow...this is beautiful. truly amazing, and i completely know where your coming from and agree. i love it
- Beth - |
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Re: Fly Free
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:08:35 PM AEST
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| hmm very interesting piece here. |
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Re: Fly Free
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 03:40:06 PM AEST
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| Don't think, just live. Very sound advice. We none of us know what life has in store, maybe that sometimes is a blessing. Good write. Enjoyed it immensely. Sue x |
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