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On That Day
Contributed by
outsider
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Watch to see if I falter
As I see you before me.
Look into my eyes then
And tell me that I think i'm wrong.
Put your hand on my chest
And tell me my heart doesn't sing your song
Let me put your hand in mine
Then see if I think it doesnt belong.
Watch me as with my speechless mouth
I kiss your lips gently and release from myself tears
As my feelings of love overflow for you
Please ease your fears
My eyes are not wet with regret
But with a feeling i've missed you for years.
Close your eyes as I wrap my arms around you
And I cling to you like a limpet to a stone
Then ask yourself if I'm overwhelmed to see you
Or content to be without you and alone.
Realise as I finally speak that I love you deeply
And never want us to part again for with you I am home.
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outsider
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2003-01-29 16:00:00]
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Re: On That Day
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by Dani on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 06:56:28 PM AEST
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| What a heart~felt poem... this is beautiful! |
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Re: On That Day
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:05:04 PM AEST
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| Such a delightful piece of work.....you can see the images you have created.....and feel the warmth too....I really liked this......Your words captured the moments of love.... |
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Re: On That Day
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by Lovingangel4u on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:24:26 PM AEST
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You know I think this poem is wonderful. Im very excited about that day. :) I love you. xxxxx
Coke and cake will be waiting. :) |
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Re: On That Day
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 01:04:10 AM AEST
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| Beautiful............. love it.. |
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