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There Is No Such Thing As love
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:58:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You're not ***** worth it
Not worth the wait
I've officially given up
I guess I'm far too late
As they say:
There no time the the present
The present is never today
And today is always late
Wanting to have someone to trust
Wishing to have someone to hold
Finding nothing but emptyness
Just depressing stories I've told
What is wrong with me?
Why did you chose her?
Did you forget the days
We had filled with laughter
Forget all the times
I'm sure are by now blurred
Forget: how you said you'd always be mine
I have a feeling you were unsure
You went far beyond crossing the line
My fears were confirmed
You made me live my nightmare
Every word for word
You bere too busy with her to care
Thank you for
Completely breaking my heart
And forcing me to realize
How easily it's torn apart
Left alone to dry my eyes
My emotions need a jumpstart
I've finnaly cried myself dry
Just remind me
For next time:
There is no such thing as love
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2006-03-04 21:58:36]
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Re: There Is No Such Thing As love
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 10:04:28 PM AEST
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ohhh april i hate to see you hurt like this... and i would try and prove you wrong on the whole love thing, but i know better than to mess w/ the broken-hearted.
Wonderful poem of course, the emotion practically jumps out of it. i loved it.
get better! and i hope writing will help you!
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Re: There Is No Such Thing As love
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by BloodyTearDrops on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 10:35:01 PM AEST
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I love this poem. I can feel what you are trying and DID say. All guys are pricks!! You can't trust anyone with a penis. Life would be better if all girls weighed and looked the same every thing. But not them. You know. You are wonderful in your way. And if that guy can not see that then ***** him! Guys would have to love you for you and not what you look like. I would prove you wrong but love aint worth it. GREAT write!!
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Re: There Is No Such Thing As love
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 11:33:25 PM AEST
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| Im sorry, but I could not disagree more. Your poem is very heartfelt and I can appreciate the pain you experience, however, one cannot judge emotion by the bad events of one or a few experiences. Love exists, I find it hard there is not one thing in life you love. Time heals and love is experienced on the back of loves failures. The lows of love are only experienced because you have experienced the highs it offers. |
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