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Pomegranate

Contributed by RAGEyourDREAM on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:34:20 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Swirling in a neon light spiral
A gaping hole in the heavens
Don't struggle, you shouldn't have cried

Until the end, it goes on
I screamed out your name, even my voice will probably never reach you
but you know, now I'm ok with that.
Some dayyou'll be reunited with my heart
I'll dream tonight, dreams of you, because of that letter I put under my pillow

The same message is always conveyed
"If you try and change with the times,
you'll be dumped into the next world"
Is there really nothing in this fleeting life?
The beggining is the end

Time is too long
Time is too painful
The dreams don't stop
love freezes to death
on a cold night
on this long night

My consciousness splintered and powdered
Memories scattered about
Holding your ring so tightly that my tears wet the pillow

So I didn't want to hear it, I blocked my ears to your voice
one more scar added to my wrist
melting into the pain...
My dreams are too cruel, my breath is cut off
I always painfully awaken at four in the morning

Her lovely blood red pomegrantes left on the table,
Still aren't rotting, becoming aroused, why do they smile?
To the fruit being crushed, sincerely, goodbye.

Copyright © RAGEyourDREAM ... [ 2006-03-04 21:34:20]
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Re: Pomegranate (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:51:16 PM AEST
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your pain in the poem jumps out like the red pomegranet would in a blanket of snow, it's a beautiful poem, and i hope it all works out for you,

best of wishes,
~drtylilsecret

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