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…sweet redemption…
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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And you’re still
looking at me and into me
and my eyes are like yours
and I am you.
There’s a light filtering through
unrelenting darkness to flicker
on my back like flames’ tongues.
They’re small, slender, softly dancing
fingers on the back of my neck with your smirk
and your tongue sliding between your teeth.
I crystallize and shatter gleaming,
a silly little convulsion round an oven
in my chest and under your soft palm
and cookies from gramma after we stomp the snow
from our boots.
It’s wondering and pondering and scrunching up my nose.
It’s knowing Valentines will come and go
and Christmas is but a memory,
an echoing of songs and flickering strings and thin glass;
Though I think I am cracking,
It’s knowing ice is clear and black and always strong beneath my feet.
Fingers glide through curls and you gaze down through me,
A confident warmth and sleep to fly
to twist and spiral in the sky,
through las nubes and cielo, clouds and heaven
in our eyes; sweet redemption.
[2006-03-03 23:16:55]
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Re: …sweet redemption…
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 08:01:55 PM AEST
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such soft descriptions of everything.. a lovely and beautiful poem, great job.
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Re: …sweet redemption…
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 02:04:57 PM AEST
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So very sweet and luscious, like chocolate fondu and strawberries on a chilly Saturday night. *Sighs dreamily* It still perplexes me, you know. And I think you know exactly what I am talking about. :)
I'm bathing in celestial images and diamond-studded dreams, whispers of fingertips on flesh, and eternal abandonment in eyes of blue velvet. Yep, I'm nice and warm in my big blanket of looovvveee, ^__^! You... youuuu... geez... V_V
My little slice of heaven, ^.^.
Ok, ok... BIG slice of Heaven, :D.
You take me far away from the struggles and tribulations of life... set me high in a beautiful manifestation, in a perfection too luminescent and splendiferous to be anything but us... As always, with stars in my eyes, pancakes in my stomach, and more love in my heart than yesterday. I love you, Lane. Nunca olvidase, amorsito mio.
{{{ Slave to sweet redemption dentro tus ojos... }}}
Para siempre,
~Querida.
(Gave ya a nice surprise, hmm? *.. ^_^ TQM) |
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