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Early Christmas Gift
Contributed by
kano
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I got an early Christmas present, that has brought me so much joy
Better than a Stetson hat, or some expensive toy
I didn't even ask for it, I was lucky in every way
To have this gift given to me on that special day
It didn't come with ribbons or bows, no package to undo
No tags or tape, no parts that break, nothing needing glue
In fact it is the most simple thing, that I have overlooked for so long
I know this is what was meant to be and this is where I belong
It came without a warning, and it hit me like lightning from above
If you don't know what it is yet, It is the gift of love
Nothing can take it's place, and there is no feeling better in life
I honestly believe one day, I will ask her to be my wife
Copyright ©
kano
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2006-03-04 19:34:48]
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Re: Early Christmas Gift
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 10:07:31 PM AEST
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omg that was sweet!! i must read dark poetry too often because i absolutely loved this one!
good luck w/ that love of yours, and keep writing.
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Re: Early Christmas Gift
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by freespirit on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 11:58:08 PM AEST
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hi this is a good poem
there are poet and want to be poets
you my friend are a poet great job
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