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We Wait The Rain
Contributed by
ramfire
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 06:54:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There seems to be some rain that’s coming, Joan.
The sky is filling wide with gray clouds o’er
our mountains’ massive evergreens that moan
with new wind’s show that I’ll miss evermore.
But I’ll miss sleet and snow yet nevermore.
Can’t say our life was lacking certain gain.
Yes, Joan, rough cabin’s parcel price did soar.
Lot’s frontage lies against the road called Main
that leads to village green, but we now wait the rain.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2006-03-04 18:54:15]
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Re: We Wait The Rain
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 08:08:59 PM AEST
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beautiful poem, the whole nature description of it all really does it justice in the point that you were trying to put out.. if there was a point, cause you put it under "life poetry" instead of "nature poetry" so i'm guessing there was some riddle hidden in there... ya but anyway great write.
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Re: We Wait The Rain
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by Archie on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:59:38 PM AEST
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| This is very imaginative and deep for it's short length. This is very appealing from a stylistic point of view. |
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Re: We Wait The Rain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 05:51:37 PM AEST
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Short but powerful piece.The fact that it was directed to an individual increased the effect,
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