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hurt
Contributed by
broken_cookie
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 05:33:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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theyve all dissapeared now
my friends, the ones i love
i keep trying to figure out how
i keep trying to rise above
ive cried so many tears
the smiles gone from my face
i dont like being here
i always feel out of place
the eyes stare back at me
the hands push me away
i dont know where im supposed to be
i guess i shudnt stay
each word that u said
seems 2 never leave
they keep running through my head
i never feel relief
my heart is hurt, my brain is tired
i just want to give up
our friendship has expired
the supposed strongest love
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2006-03-04 17:33:16]
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Re: hurt
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:26:48 PM AEST
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Ah, I can definately relate to this right now.
Great write!
And hang in there.
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Re: hurt
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by Jammy on
Wednesday, 2nd December 2009 @ 09:30:52 PM AEST
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This is exactly how I've been feeling lately.
This is an excellent poem.
And just remember
You can't see the future with tears in your eyes.
This is what has kept me going through the rough times.
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