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Sinking Into The Shadows
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 11:48:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Falling down a hole so vast,
Being swallowed alive by yester years,
Being digested by tomorrow’s fears.
The further I go the more lost I become,
Deeper I venture into hells slum,
Coming ever closer to Satan himself,
Giving to him my virginity’s wealth.
Lost in the dark afraid and alone,
With only the reaper to pick at my bones,
Tormenting and teasing me with new horror,
Promising only a darker tomorrow.
Lower and lower my body does sink,
Now I wait at insanities brink,
My body is now his for the taking,
I will take the blunt of his torture and raping.
Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Living in fear or the curse that’s been cast,
Forever will I walk within no mans land,
With all but the devil to hold onto my hand.
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pixie
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2006-03-04 11:48:18]
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:14:23 PM AEST
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| another brilliantly written poem by pixie...your talent is so evident in everything you post..it's been a while since i've read much from you...you havn't been posting much lately have you? |
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by Brasco on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:18:46 PM AEST
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Very descriptive and dark poem, I especially liked the last lines in the first verse:
Being swallowed alive by yester years,
Being digested by tomorrow’s fears.
I can defiantly relate to that. All in all I think it was well done and I enjoyed the rhyme.
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 02:09:55 PM AEST
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Sinking into the shadows of my past,
Falling down a hole so vast
wow. beautiful write. i know exactly how you feel, its so scary. |
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:56:07 PM AEST
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I say Pixie girl your poetry is always so deep and emotional that i can't help but feel how your feeling.
Ever need to talk i am here.
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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Brillant. This was a very dark poem. I liked it alot. It was very very good. I like the way that you write your thoughts and how you express them it is amazing..
christina |
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Re: Sinking Into The Shadows
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 07:14:08 PM AEST
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| Sadly beautiful flowing write |
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