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when the prying eyes are gone
Contributed by
-why_not_let_me_live-
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Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 08:52:44 AM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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As i hide away, from prying eyes,
I can be myself, no disguise,
This is me, But no one sees,
I wont let them, for ive tried so hard to please,
But ive been doing this for far to long,
Pleasing everyone is doing me wrong,
I thought it would make me happy, but deep down inside,
My true self is hidden, but very much alive,
Its dying to get out, and im dying to let it,
But who i am wont be accepted,
So i continue to hide, until your all gone,
prying eyes, leave my secrets alone.
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Re: when the prying eyes are gone
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:59:39 AM AEST
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It is hard to let people in. Some will betray your thoughts and secrets. But it is alwys worth the effort, just to find those few who will listen and understand. It also opens up a way for you to listen to them. You will find when you let some in they let you in as well.
Good write!
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Re: when the prying eyes are gone
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by dougnut on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 04:13:46 PM AEST
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I can empathise with you and your thoughts
Its good to write down how you feel
thats how I started writing poetry.
I used to isolate and hibernate and put on mask all the time.
Now I COME FIRST FOR A CHANGE.
great read Good poetry.
Thanks for sharing with us.
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Re: when the prying eyes are gone
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by -why_not_let_me_live- on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:29:44 AM AEST
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thankyou every1 for your comments
thats how i started poetry to but not all mi poetry is about me (this one is tho)
lots of love xoxo
whyntletmelive |
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Re: when the prying eyes are gone
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by EmptyGirl on
Monday, 6th March 2006 @ 12:06:14 AM AEST
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| I really, really like this. It touched me. |
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