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Hiding

Contributed by The_Phantom on Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 08:46:23 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

The clouds grow dark, I feel an emptiness in my heart,
So far from home, feeling all alone,
Unsure of what to do, knowing how much I love you,
Time goes by so slow, God how can I let you know,

I'm not dead, but I'm not alive, please excuse me while I cry,
Just bits and pieces of your face, the rest lost or misplaced,
My mask removed, now do you have a clear view,
Can you see the pain in my eyes, watch as my heart dies,

Waiting and anticipating, for a chance to go home,
Controling and fighting back these tears of stone,
Lonely and fading, heartbroken and waiting,
Going through the motions, upset that the world is imposing,

Walls closing in, searching for peace within,
Not believing I'll be found, digging my own hole six feet in the ground,
One foot in the casket, the other on a banana peel,
Do you see where this is going, do you know how this feels,

Pain, sorrow, start the scars of tomorrow,
Torment, and rain, define my yesterdays,
Tears endosed by fear, hiding myself from my peers
Putting back on the mask, hiding from my past.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2006-03-04 08:46:23]
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Re: Hiding (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:51:04 AM AEST
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Kinda sad and yet sweet
very nice write

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