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Waiting for their return.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:17:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Night soon begins to fall and the only safe place is behind the wall.
Mideast militia marching to hatred and with more to be said.
We to step up as well and praying our return alive and not dead.
So let's pray for our troops as they make their way.
As to assure us the continued freedon we all cherish everyday.
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2006-03-03 22:17:00]
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Re: Waiting for their return.
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:30:10 PM AEST
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| i agree, i hope all those make it home safe. great write thanks for sharing this heart felt write! :) A++++ |
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Re: Waiting for their return.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 12:01:10 AM AEST
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| Thank you, keep saying prayers, He is listening.. Amen. raquelLeah |
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Re: Waiting for their return.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 06:50:32 AM AEST
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| That is a very very nice poem. Wonderful dedication and yes, I agree. Remember our troops from all the nations that are trying to keep the peace. and things in check. |
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Re: Waiting for their return.
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:29:54 AM AEST
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A great tribute to soldiers. Well Done!
- SCM |
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Re: Waiting for their return.
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by bakacaka on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 01:05:17 AM AEST
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It was great at the beginning but then the propaganda at the end completely destroyed the poem's credibility. While the sentiment of troop support is indeed important and necessary this poem mocks it.
"God is on America's side" -Bush |
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