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The Book of Life Part II
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:13:11 PM in AEST
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They come in masses mainly at night
Looking to do nothing but pick a fight
Ugly creatures that are foul and stink
Wiping us out extinction is on the brink
No more elders to guide us through
Not much to protect us men folk are few
I feel compelled to protect my land
I know somehow I must make a stand
But these creatures are not alone in this act
Something or someone bigger is guiding that is a fact
For these monsters are not the smartest out there
To say they are stupid would be quite fair
I have to find the one who is in charge
And take them out no matter how large
It is up to me I have been told
It is my destiny that now unfolds
If I could I would definitely
Rip this page out of
The
Book
Of
Life
Copyright ©
NoSaint
... [
2006-03-03 19:13:11]
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 08:21:15 PM AEST
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Oh if we only could rip out the pages of life that are worrisome or dangerous. I see the path toward spiritual knowledge that you are traveling. I shall read as you continue on your path to enlightenment.
Rita |
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:17:38 PM AEST
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wow I love the flow of this and I agree on that last part.. it would be nice to rip out particular pages of our lives awesome job and thanks for sharing this piece with us
JENNI |
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by The_Phantom on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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Well done my friend, I look forward to the other parts.
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:59:15 PM AEST
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The creatures expect us to go in hiding.. guess what, we must stand up tall, with Him we are never defeated.
raqueLeah |
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:09:35 AM AEST
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| Great poem Shari. Well composed....Mike |
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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An amazing second act in this (I hope) ongoing saga. I enjoyed this tremendously. I love how you had the hero stand up, and actually belitte the enemy. Something that I think we all do when we are pushed into a corner. The way you ended this one was superb. I really did not think you would somewhat discard this act, abd yet in a way you did but didn't. Well done! I hope there are more.
BRAVO!
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 01:54:24 AM AEST
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| awsome awsome |
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Re: The Book of Life Part II
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 03:15:27 AM AEST
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Oh so beautifully done. Some speak of "Enlightenment" Perhaps it consists in the acceptance with love of the present moment.
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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