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Real
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:37:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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finally i see
through
all those lies
you told me
finally i see
what i knew
was true
finally i am the
damaged goods
i always knew
i was
and i was right
about everything
you did
it hurts me
in a way you
could never
understand
it makes
everything
so
real
Copyright ©
DarkFaerie
... [
2006-03-03 18:37:04]
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Re: Real
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:41:05 PM AEST
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| Short, but truly a great write. Eventhough it is short, i really can feel your hurt and anger. GREAT POEM. |
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Re: Real
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by ginnginn11 on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem i think you could do really well for yourself with these. |
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Re: Real
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this I liked how it was realistic.. im sure everyone can relate to this at a time .. I know i can thanks for sharing good write indeed
JENNI |
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Re: Real
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by thesinner on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST
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| It says so much with so little. I really feel the pain. |
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Re: Real
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by pixie on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 07:54:16 AM AEST
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I can feel your pain through your words. this was a powerful and emotional write!!!
hugs
Pix xx |
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Re: Real
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:03:31 PM AEST
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| Mental pain > Physical pain? |
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Re: Real
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th June 2006 @ 09:30:27 PM AEST
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This hit's the heart of the heart. So much hurt and pain and 2 ask y is an insult in in self as if any would tell us, even if they new. A sad write in deed.
Ben |
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