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All that is said by words
Contributed by
Alison
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:55:34 PM in AEST
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When all is said,
When nothing at all is said,
That which needed to be said was not,
Nothing is needed to be said at all.
Something that can will or will not be said,
What’s done is not said,
Must something be said at all?
The future, past, present is unsaid,
All that is said is truth or not,
Which is said is life,
Laughing and tears is said,
Smiling is said, looking is said.
When that, nothing or something,
What must the all,
Which Laughing, smiling,
It is all said.
I love.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-02 23:55:34]
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Re: All that is said by words
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by rugby_player on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 01:01:54 AM AEST
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| good write got me confused in smoe parts but i also have a very febal mind...in other words i ain't to bright up stairs..lol but keep working wnat to read more by you |
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Re: All that is said by words
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 06:11:12 AM AEST
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| I also found it confusing to read. Had to read it a couple of times. Nice job. |
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Re: All that is said by words
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by slogan on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:58:31 AM AEST
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| good write..jh |
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Re: All that is said by words
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by whiteleo1984 on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 11:53:42 AM AEST
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| a little confusin but over-all a great write |
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Re: All that is said by words
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 02:00:40 PM AEST
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I didn't find it that confusing, but that's because my mind's already twisted so much I'm used to seeing things from weird angles. I really liked this poem, especially the 11th and 12th lines, very beautiful. I found this very poetic.
Take care.
David |
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