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fade
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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bled blue
and, oh so cold
he waited for his love
an ex-angel
with a barcode on her neck
she denied her wings for him
death came reaping twice that night
leaving him widowed
and without a son
this world so hollow
without their smiles
his heart, a pool of tears
three times attempted
three times denied
he even fails at suicide
were their deaths
mere accidents?
or had his love destroyed them both?
unanswered questions
and guilt took their toll
so young and yet, so ***** old
his life so barren in their absence
he could not bear to stay
so what do you do
when you're too sad to die?
you simply fade away
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-01-29 11:20:00]
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Re: fade
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:47:16 PM AEST
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hey this one is nice too. Simply fade away. that was my favorite part!
Always
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Re: fade
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 10:52:40 PM AEST
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Wow Roy this was my favourite of yours so far. Loved it a lot very well written. I sensed a lot of pain in this. Awesome write!
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