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Diary of the Strong Silent Type
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Now that you are gone,
I sit numb next to your lingering scent,
left only with an album of mental snapshots
I can only share with myself.
You knew I loved you when we met.
When I could not speak to you
it was because my silent heart
could not understand the passion
blossoming from your lips.
You knew I loved you when we made love.
Your unforgotten brown eyes
send out tears to my blues.
They are the windows to your soul.
I cry because I can no longer see.
You knew I loved you when we parted.
I compare love to you,
as I always have.
Your brown eyes brought me
the peace I was missing.
The red of your lips
allowed my self to be free.
The softness of your skin
reached me like no other sensation.
I need to say I love you now
when I compare love to you.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
... [
2006-03-02 21:13:06]
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:20:05 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. It's all I can say. |
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 09:45:53 PM AEST
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nothing I say would do this justice. Splendid in each moment throughout.
Michelle |
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by twick on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:42:13 PM AEST
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| Wow, I usually don't react to love poetry, sad or happy or of any kind for that matter but this made me make the aw(sad) face. This is truly good. |
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by Gothchyk on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:27:16 AM AEST
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| this was amazing, it fits my circumstances perfectly,thanks for writing it. |
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by potpiegrrl on
Sunday, 5th March 2006 @ 02:20:46 PM AEST
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| it's very beautiful, very sad.... |
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Re: Diary of the Strong Silent Type
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:41:07 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write.
i know this topic well (unfortunately)...and i can empathize with this perfectly.
you've captured the essence of lost love with every word.
beautiful sadness.
wiz |
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