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I know your there!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I know I cant see you,
but your there,
I know I cant feel you,
but your presence is there,
You dont have to say a word,
I know your still around,
your voice I wish I heard,
remembering that beautiful sound,
I know your watching from afar,
I feel you always near,
You shine like a twinkling star,
at night when they appear,
I dont have to hear you,
or see the unknown to believe,
your presence shines through,
my eyes are what deceive,
I know I cant see,or hear you,
but you are there,
I trust in my heart to be true,
your spirit I share,
I talk to you,I know you can hear me,
but your words are not heard,
I miss our talks that use to be,
with all your loving words,
Mom there will be a time to communicate,
turning lights off & on,
If only I knew thats what I hate,
because the signs are strong,
Are you trying to tell me something,
I cant figure it out,
strange things are happening,
because of you I have no doubt!
What do they mean,
What are you trying to say,
The things I've seen,
that happen everyday?????
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LOWMAN613
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2003-01-29 10:40:00]
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Re: I know your there!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 11:28:58 AM AEST
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| Christina, so heart-warming, your mother is very present for you, I heard once those signs meant love for light, and and the light turned off is to rest your pain, I might be wrong but I wanting to share that with you |
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Re: I know your there!
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 01:05:47 PM AEST
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I thank you for sharing this..
rosie |
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Re: I know your there!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 01:39:47 PM AEST
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great write
Shari |
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Re: I know your there!
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:18:37 PM AEST
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| By the sounds of things, I think your mother is trying to tell you, that she is there and watching over you with her love. Very beautiful write Christina. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: I know your there!
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:25:25 PM AEST
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Christina. I often feel mum is there but I have great sorrow that we moved away when I got married and my wife and her didn't get on.
I hope we'll meet again one day. Your poem helped a lot to move the "clouds" away |
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Re: I know your there!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 12:21:55 AM AEST
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| hmmm... if i get started i won't stop lol.. this is great, been there and seen the lights *wink* love and hugs always nessa |
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