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On The Beach
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:06:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Have you ever seen the sky melt into the sea?
The sun sets forming an orange and yellow scene,
Two souls lie upon the beach as the waves tickle their feet,
It starts with a soft kiss upon the neck, half wants to resist, the other accepts,
Something inside ignites like fire, two hearts become one in pursuit of their desire,
Emotions erupt from deep inside their soul, passion explode and the senses overload,
It’s no longer a want, it becomes a need, remove the clothes and indulge in their fantasies,
Open the gates to Eden, as I will soon enter in,
Our bodies become one as my hips rest against your thighs,
It’s heaven on Earth as we both close our eyes,
The moments seem like hours while our hearts combine,
Closer and closer the end draws near,
One more thrust and we should be there,
You lunge forward and I lose all control,
You tremble in relief as you accept my soul.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2006-03-02 16:06:05]
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Re: On The Beach
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by pixie on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:27:14 PM AEST
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heavenly beautiful Phantom, great work!!!
pix :) |
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Re: On The Beach
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:32:00 PM AEST
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exquisite
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Re: On The Beach
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by sweetnesssquared on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:17:56 PM AEST
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| I was completely lost...awesome work Phantom... |
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Re: On The Beach
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:18:59 PM AEST
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| very sensual.Loved it. |
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Re: On The Beach
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:11:27 PM AEST
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blissful, tempting write Matt, I really loved this. Vivid and beautiful. Words escape me with this one.
Michelle |
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Re: On The Beach
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:42:31 PM AEST
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WooHOO!! Matt... I'm impressed!!
Need I say more!!!
Hugs
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Re: On The Beach
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by DreamPoetess on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:48:10 AM AEST
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| Steam rising off that sand, I like this poem. MW |
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