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Heaven Tonight
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Let’s take a trip to heaven tonight,
Just lay back and hold me tight,
Look much deeper into my soul,
When we entwine we become whole.
Let us fly on the wings of love,
Soar through the sky like a turtle dove,
As you hold me close please never let go,
As we fly we look down on the world below.
Come let us fly to heavens gate,
We can go now there’s no need to wait,
Just you and me alone together,
Breaking the rules and changing the weather.
As we climb higher than high,
My soul smiles and lets out a cry,
Desire strokes softly at my face,
Makes my skin tingle, makes my heart race.
Come my love heavens not far,
It’s just beyond that twinkling star,
From here on in it’s just you and me,
And together our love will set us free.
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pixie
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2006-03-02 14:25:35]
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:44:37 PM AEST
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| Very beautifully written. Enjoyed reading this very much. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 03:48:25 PM AEST
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This flowed beautifully and was such a joy to read.
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:12:48 PM AEST
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Very good, I could feel the love in each and every word, we shall accept this poem as one of a kind, thanks for the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:59:46 PM AEST
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Splendid pix. As always a joy 2 read and absorb into ones emotional realm. Thanks 4 sharing.
(((((pixie)))))
Ben |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 05:04:32 PM AEST
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Great rythm with sweet feelings of love well expressed. Nice job!
Butch |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Alison on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 03:14:36 AM AEST
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it is so sweet i want to cry! i am glad you feel that way about someone b/c that should
make your life wonderful...
most of the time.lol |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 04:00:05 AM AEST
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Yeah Buddy !!! Pixie at her best. I'm lovin' it !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 4th March 2006 @ 09:37:02 AM AEST
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| Timeless piece of writing. Such beautiful imagery in this one....Mike |
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Re: Heaven Tonight
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 19th March 2019 @ 01:48:59 AM AEST
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| Great writing indeed!! |
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