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Contributed by
twick
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Compound the daily average
I decided not to participate
I'll pay for it later, I always do
It's all just scrambled eggs and toast.
Believe the believers and dream keepers
they have all the answers
or the best sounding.
Follow your heartbeat with a drumbeat
moving with fast feet.
That will keep you present
pretending is almost better than the real thing
Oh, and one more thing
change your facial features
they're screaming their "**** yous" all too clearly
It's a one way ticket to "Are you okay?"
And hey,
if you spend all of your time pretending
you'll forget you're not
just another tip from one of the lost.
Copyright ©
twick
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2006-03-02 14:00:41]
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Re: Members Only
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:26:22 PM AEST
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Interesting read, this piece can be taken in many differant ways, well done.
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Re: Members Only
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:14:00 PM AEST
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| I agree an interesting read. |
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Re: Members Only
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 11:38:09 AM AEST
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again i really love your style of writing.
it sounds a lot like something i would write.
wonderful and beautifuly written
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