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Take This Ring
Contributed by
ramfire
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:06:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take this ring I give to you in love.
Say but yes, I'll give band little shove.
Makes your third finger lookes nice, small dove.
Gold ring on sweet left hand
Shines all full never wear dainty glove.
You will look ever grand.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2006-03-02 11:06:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Take This Ring
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:56:24 PM AEST (User
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I like the simplicity of this. It is not quite the limerick style that i am used to seeing from you but it is a cool change of pace. |
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Re: Take This Ring
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 08:49:28 AM AEST (User
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Nice.. I liked it..
Take care
christina |
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