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The King of Tides
Contributed by
BSteel
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Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 07:09:13 AM in AEST
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The tides are rolling in and out,
Smashing against the rocks,
Mocking our fruitless talk,
Growing silent we need no trumpet,
Hand in hand through the sand we walk,
The breeze whispers something triumphant,
Something I could never say in a million words,
Something rises in my soul, feelings smash and roll,
In every direction,
Flooding every cell receptor,
Just when it feels like everything is handled,
Feelings are pulled away,
A soul left stranded,
Seemingly, eternally, branded,
By the pull of the great collector,
As the moon sparks a reflection,
I trust my feelings too much,
Which is dangerous and obsessive,
But like the tides I roll on regardless,
No matter how many rocks I must erode, no matter how many walls I must tear down,
In the process,
For the king of tides is calling.
Copyright ©
BSteel
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2006-03-02 07:09:13]
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Re: The King of Tides
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:04:18 AM AEST
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your flow is improving a very good write
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Re: The King of Tides
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:41:50 AM AEST
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Very imaginative and visually appealing.
KEEP WRITING!
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Re: The King of Tides
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 11:05:21 AM AEST
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Oh the Pull of the Great Collector.
Does HE not whirl us around to "make Soul" either in darkness of the spirit or the tidal waves!
Griopping poem.
Thanks for composing
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Re: The King of Tides
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by shelby on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 08:23:37 PM AEST
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Strong write. It carried me along with your thoughts.
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Re: The King of Tides
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by Hoo on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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| good stuff... great metaphor... had a few lines in there that spoke real strongly |
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