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Your Surreal

Contributed by BSteel on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 12:44:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

If I could remember every movement,
I could make a movie,
locked away in a mental ward,
your love drove me to insanity,
I remember every tear I violenty shed,
this was years ago,
you probably never think of me,
I rememeber you read my discourse,
"Dean's Demise", and it almost brought tears to your eyes,
you told me about your father that died,
Ironically, how it led to you spending time in a mental ward,
yet i did not nor will ever care to stigmtize,
the form of your face, the deepness of your eyes had me more than hypnotized,
it was like a spiritual awakening,
like meeting a Scottish Queen,
I've seen and talked to many girls in my time,
so let me tell you love at first sight
not lust or infatutation I cannot over emphasis ,
it essentially came down to the essence,
the way I felt around her,
it is something to do this day, a feeling I have never nor will ever again probablly experience,
you will probably try and say "oh you will",
but not the way I loved this girl,
If only I could rememeber every movement,
I can remember the dark ride home from Pittsburgh to Philly, on the old PA highway,
every moment , no I'm not a hopeless romantic, I'm a realist, trying to piece together images for you stole the soft soul
i once had, Now!
if you ever hear these words or they appear in print somewhere, remember you encased my heart in steel, your a guiding angel that i would give my life for.
why do i even bother,
I guess because you were surreal. And the moments we shared were so sweet and real.

Copyright © BSteel ... [ 2006-03-02 00:44:46]
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Re: Your Surreal (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:27:20 PM AEST
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A sad story poem Love lost, Reflections of hurt

and pain show through in this brave piece of

writing, I hope you find another one to love

God Bless.

dougnut.

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