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The Piano Player
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The graceful movement of her hand,
Her each touch is a birth of life,
The black notes her eyes comprehend,
To create a symphony of heartache and strife.
For it is not merely,
A simple tale of Ebony and Ivory,
It is her story towards destiny,
As she walks in song and flies in melody.
She lifts her hands gently off the keys,
And marks the completion of a masterpiece,
But she still sits there shining aglow,
For sweeter sounds of tomorrow.
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blueheart
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2003-01-29 09:20:00]
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Re: The Piano Player
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 09:13:08 AM AEST
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| beautiful................. |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by mckayla on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 11:30:19 AM AEST
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It sounds like she plays the piano like you write poetry! Beautiful!
mckayla |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by Ronald on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:50:23 AM AEST
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| Wow! Wonderful! I'm a pianist myself but I think your friend is 10 X much better than me like how you described it in your poem. Great write pal! Love to see more of your works soon. Anyway, recommend this site to more Malaysians ok? |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by vegastar on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 10:24:27 PM AEST
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Colorful and imagainative,,,free flowing with continuous motion. I really like it.
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Re: The Piano Player
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by Jarmen_Kell on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 09:12:28 AM AEST
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| Wow that's...just...smooth... |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by Qohinoor on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 08:53:47 PM AEST
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| I know what you're thinking...I used to play piano myself, too... it's just that with so much work to do these days, I have no time to play at all, and it merely just sticks there for my CV. Oh well. |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:17:06 PM AEST
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O I like this one because I have been a piano player for many years. I love the way you describe this. Its like this girl is here right in front of my eyes. I can vision it perfectly. YOu have a rare gift. Keep on doing what you do best.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: The Piano Player
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:39:56 PM AEST
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| Hanna, what a wonderful write. I am happy to see she inspired you. *S* Cynthia |
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