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Rain
Contributed by
Kailei
on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:41:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The water is so cold, it is coming down off my
r o
o f
and dripping into the green, fresh grass. And I
a k
s
myself, what would it be like to be a rain drop
t a e i g
r v l n
from the clouds, rushing to beat all of the
o h r
t e s
to the finish line , pushing and splashing their
w y
a
to victory. The lucky one lands in the gutters. The
a r
i
is wet and cold and I would land in the grass,
b a i g
e t n
many other rain drops. But I wake up and see that I
a
m
so soaked into the ground, but I manage to squish
m s l
y e f
to the top, so I can be dropped again.
Copyright ©
Kailei
... [
2006-03-01 23:41:11]
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Re: Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 06:17:56 AM AEST
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This is new to me, great job it was fun to read.
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Re: Rain
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:20:15 PM AEST
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That was pretty cool, havn't seen that style before, I may try it one day, thanks for the read.
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