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ConfusionThought
Contributed by
RavenEnsued
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 09:20:24 PM in AEST
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Confused, that is what I am
I see you and I really dont understand
You tell me you want me, just for fun
I wont be with you, because I cant let us be one
Love words that you say youre always trying to perfect
To such an extent, that they have no effect
Buildings burn, wounds leave scars
We live in a world in which we idolize the stars
Thought is the only coherent thing alive
Though it does not speak to us,
It helps us see inside is where our hearts lie.
Love, passion, and lust are all different things
I know that this all looks the same to you
Which is why I always feel used
There isnt enough time to try and make sense of all this
So here are my last words ones written from my heart
Because here my sweet is where we depart.
I love you.
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RavenEnsued
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2006-03-01 21:20:24]
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Re: ConfusionThought
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th May 2007 @ 07:29:31 AM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. You expressed a lot of good points great job! |
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Re: ConfusionThought
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by fayeelizibeth on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 10:22:26 PM AEST
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| i can breathe in the confusion, loving someone who dosent know that that means to you (and maybe not to themselves, either) what exsquisite pain, what a good write! |
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