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Colour Washes into Gray
Contributed by
SoonerOrLater
on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 09:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Stone archways crown the
memories once lost, like outstretched arms
opening into oblivion.
There she stands, speaking to loneliness
and now you feel like telling her that
you're sorry
(but you just walk away, hand in hand
with guilt).
She glances up bitterly, and her watery smile
whispers the words "Go for it".
Out of the corner of your eye
(where colour washes into gray),
you watch her slowly disintegrate
and blow away --
like dust in the wind.
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SoonerOrLater
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2006-03-01 21:00:06]
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Re: Colour Washes into Gray
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:18:27 PM AEST
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You gave up......?
Seems it was there and will always be, just not at the right moment.
Hm....
hard, yet so true, for some.
Good and sad write.
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Re: Colour Washes into Gray
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 04:29:00 PM AEST
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I felt this piece, deep and so true, enjoyed the read.
The Phantom |
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