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Steady Secrets
Contributed by
crimson_regret420
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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His name,
Always on the tip of my tongue.
His face,
Forever painted on the inside of my eyelids.
His laugh,
Echoes through my empty eardrums.
His voice,
Enraptures my soul; keeps me breathing.
His humor,
Drowns me in tears of laughter.
His kindness,
Graces my presence in my times of need.
His friendship,
Keeps the steady beating of my heart.
But these steady secrets bound by lock and key,
He shall never know.
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2006-03-01 19:03:34]
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Re: Steady Secrets
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by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:06:42 PM AEST
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| why????? |
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Re: Steady Secrets
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:10:38 PM AEST
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| Great write, some times its better to keep those feelings locked away....Mike |
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Re: Steady Secrets
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 08:54:41 PM AEST
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aww this is a good write. .I liked the flow.. i think you should tell this someone how you feel.. better to know now then to never know ya know what im mean by that?? at least if they don't like you you can move on and forget them .. but awesome write.. thanks for sharing
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Re: Steady Secrets
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 09:38:46 PM AEST
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Aww this is really sweet..and I think you should show it to him...
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Re: Steady Secrets
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:11:23 PM AEST
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But what about regret?
Tell him. Maybe he feels the same. |
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