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SARAH GOODENOUGH
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 04:52:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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SARAH GOODENOUGH
When One Loves And The Other Doesn't
by Robert Davidson
Sarah was an erotic blonde
Rather wide-eyed and very pink -
Who presented Love in its most obese aspect
As honey-coloured her hair fell liquid gold
Not the most romantic of love-nests, she thought
As she lay exposed upon the heap of hessian in the shed
Beside a pot of maidenhair and garden tools
While outside was a desperate magpie's cry
He had always wanted the fast lane, she knew
Exciting embraces in corners
The moment of quick passion in the dark -
He, distrusting the snares of sentiment
Feared she was waiting to trap him with tender love-talk
She felt the pressure of his body against her own
Her blunt fingers touching, stroking, pleasing
While he tried out her buttocks with a callused hand.
You enjoyed her like a warm bath, he once said
The strong grip of her solid thighs
Declare your secret love? Not likely!
She was biting her hand against bitter tears
Knowing it was the way life got hold of you.
Outside in the garden a thrush sang sweetly. But -
No - she knew she could never speak her silent love!
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Re: SARAH GOODENOUGH
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:01:19 PM AEST
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| Nice poem I realy liked so you get A well done from me Eddy |
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Re: SARAH GOODENOUGH
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:36:03 PM AEST
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~*Robert*~
It's always a pleasure to visit ur pages my friend. One is never disappointed with its contents.
Your poem speaks a thousand words. It's so sad when one does it for love and the other out of lust.
Well done ~*Robert*~. Keep up the great work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: SARAH GOODENOUGH
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 07:35:57 PM AEST
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This is a nice surprise to see you posting again Robert, we all have missed you. This poem is very beautiful.
My comment:
It seems to me the woman wants to have a wonderful love, unfortunately knowing the brusque manner of a person he is and distrusting of all attachments of love, her love will never be returned as she wants it to be.
I really love this poem, I thank you so much, I hope to see you post more of your masterpiece art.
Hugs,
RaquelLeah |
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Re: SARAH GOODENOUGH
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by Jyssvw on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:26:03 PM AEST
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felt like i was reading a novel
you should publish |
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