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Fizzle, Hiss, Crack, Pop
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:40:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fizzle and hiss.
Crackle and pop.
How mortified was I,
When my beloved laptop died.
At first I was angry.
Then I cried.
I hit that stupid power button,
And the back only blew smoke at me.
The world almost ended.
I called mom and complained.
She told me, “I told you so!
We should have called Greg!”
I should have listened.
My poor Sims…
They sit doing nothing on my hard drive,
Whilst my novel sits collecting dust.
Now I sit in a computer lab…
Grumbling because my laptop isn’t fixed.
Copyright ©
Angelic_Demon
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2006-03-01 14:40:11]
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Re: Fizzle, Hiss, Crack, Pop
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 05:40:40 PM AEST
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awwww... hang in there kiddo, this too shall pass.....
love mom xx |
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Re: Fizzle, Hiss, Crack, Pop
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by dougnut on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 10:32:39 AM AEST
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I can fully empathise with you on this great
read nice poetry
I was offline for ten days last year it nearly
drove me round the bend I can tell you.
I loved your fun poem, although not funny at
the time I bet.
Thanks for sharing Made me smile.
dougnut. |
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Re: Fizzle, Hiss, Crack, Pop
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 02:39:31 AM AEST
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Beautifully written poem my friend. Well done.
FRANCO |
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