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A Million Pieces
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:34:19 AM in AEST
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My world is in a million pieces,
My soul is battered and bruised,
My heart yearns for a love that’s true,
I close my eyes, Lord let me see,
How is the world without little ol’ me,
Is it a better place, do they have smiles on their face,
Do they cry tears of joy, do they sing hymns without names,
Do they remember if I was here, or do they weep silent tears?
Is the past still the past, or has the future arrived at last,
Does tomorrow bring a sunny day, or has hope all but faded away,
Does my poetry still receive praise, or is it buried in this casket, in which I lay,
It matters not if I’m dead; thoughts of poetry remain in my head,
Though my pen may cease to write, it’s the words I wrote that keep me alive,
Have I been forgotten, will I be remembered,
The question that burns is the one that hasn’t been answered,
“Why must my death define my existence?”
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2006-03-01 10:34:19]
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:07:43 AM AEST
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A really good job here. I enjoyed this write. I like how you went from an explanation into two stanzas of questions.
Keep Writing!
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:25:52 AM AEST
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So nice to see a post from you your missed here. Your never forgotten my friend. Emotional beautiful write.
Michelle |
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 11:53:37 AM AEST
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hmm and interesting write i like it.
keep up the good work. |
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:25:53 PM AEST
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The Phantom will always be remembered here for his work is exquisite...missed reading your writing.
Shari (aka formerly Ilhar) |
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 12:53:04 PM AEST
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Hi there,
Not seen you for awhile, how are you? *hugs*
This was a emotional and deep write, very good stuff!!
take care
Pix :) |
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:57:32 PM AEST
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Great to see you posting again, old buddy....
You will never be forgotten, Matt....not in this lifetime. Your poems always bring a smile to my face. I hope and pray that you are all right..
Hugs and love from your island friend...
Jenni |
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Re: A Million Pieces
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 10:04:54 PM AEST
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| Good one! |
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