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Losing Control
Contributed by
Amazon
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:35:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don’t know what to do,
I feel like such a fool
My mind is no longer my own
walking around, constantly zoned
I can’t concentrate
oh this feeling I hate
AND I CAN”T DO A GOD DAME THING
I know I must regain control
before my problems start to roll
But I constantly ask,
how long can this last ?
Is this even my place?
Or am I drifting in outer space?
WHY AM I HERE ANYWAY?
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Amazon
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2006-02-28 19:35:35]
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Re: Losing Control
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:52:41 PM AEST
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if we new why we are here life wouldnt be fun anymore we are here because thats when you fill in the blanks good write
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Re: Losing Control
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 08:35:14 PM AEST
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| Good thought poem |
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Re: Losing Control
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 01:26:31 PM AEST
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I know how u feel. Not a bad piece of writing here btw..
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