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Set You Free
Contributed by
bethers_is_my_baby
on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:18:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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How can you hurt me
When I love you so much
Push me away
While I yearn for your touch
You tell me you care
When its all just a lie
Not caring that I sit here
Just wishing to die
Hoping you'll kill me
So I'll finally be free
Wishing you meant it
When you said you loved me
A death wish I have
Is soon to come true
For I know I was stupid
For ever trusting you
So take it all away
My life and my pain
My death will set you free
I wont die in vain
Copyright©2006 Amanda Hope Indelicato
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Re: Set You Free
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:53:08 PM AEST (User
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well done |
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Re: Set You Free
(User Rating: 1 ) by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:16:46 PM AEST (User
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strong feelings
strong write
death is always in vain!
thank you
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Re: Set You Free
(User Rating: 1 ) by Amazon on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:40:16 PM AEST (User
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very strong poem the emotions reach out from the paper
i have felt this way b4 aswell |
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