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Under Cover
Contributed by
Sinned
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 11:58:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Mass at eleven
No one knows
No one sees
Let life begin
Flowers left
Flowers right
The alter set
Father Son Holy Spirit
Chatter surcome
Sobs muffled
Smiles and nods
In His name
Once born never to die
Eternal life
Six men carry
Seventh can't cry
A lid closed down
Under cover no one sees
sprinkled water I am blessed Rest in peace fellow man
Saint Peter millions more
Mother Mary answers me
Father mother brother son
Aunt cousin friend uncle
Under cover no one sees
Bless is my sinful soul
All glory honor be Spirit Father Son
Prayerfully I fall to my knees
Sinned
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Sinned
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2006-02-28 11:58:20]
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Re: Under Cover
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:02:12 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Under Cover
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:05:09 PM AEST
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painted a vivid picture here, nicely done.
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Re: Under Cover
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 12:07:09 PM AEST
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painted a vivid picture here, nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: Under Cover
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 01:35:55 PM AEST
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Yes indeed the above commenter got it right. A very vivid picture of the human situation.
Perhaps we can do something to bring a measure of awareness,- consiousness about it all. So sad that so many people are blind and deaf..to all the beauty around them, and they could help it, but the blind are too often leading the blind.
Beautifully done Dennis.
Thanks a lot for sharing. |
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Re: Under Cover
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 02:30:15 PM AEST
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This is a very great poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Under Cover
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:10:55 PM AEST
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i really like this poem
it sounds like a secret is being hidden
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