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Plastic
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:32:55 AM in AEST
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You look in the mirror,
What do you see?
A fake image,
...So ugly...
Put on a smile,
You stupid *****,
A perfect picture,
...So pathetic...
They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.
I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.
You're too empty,
Dead inside.
Another scar on your arm,
...So soulless...
Hurting all over,
From your stupid lies.
A simple mistake,
...So betrayed...
They all watch,
As you scream.
They all believe,
As you dream.
I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.
Go ahead... Cry,
No one can hear you,
Not a soul even cares,
...So delusioned...
Don't tell them a thing,
Hide behind your lies.
Run far away,
...So lost...
They all watch,
What you wish you could be.
They all believe,
What you want them to see.
I'll watch you melt,
I'll watch you die.
I know how you felt,
I know when you cry.
And when you wilt,
You're so plastic.
...Fade away...
I'll watch you die,
Around all your deceit,
You're so plastic.
I'll watch you melt,
Under the heat,
You're so plastic...
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Karlee14
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Re: Plastic
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by Hurretje on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 03:37:26 AM AEST
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Haunting poetry full of emotion.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Plastic
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:36:17 AM AEST
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people seem to think that if your pretty, lifes a breeze for ya, life aint a breeze for anyone.
good emotive, thought provoking poem thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: Plastic
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by ale5shr on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:26:55 AM AEST
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| very thought provoking. liked it really did. most people seem plastic to me. As you said "You're so plastic" |
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Re: Plastic
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by ale5shr on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:26:57 AM AEST
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| very thought provoking. liked it really did. most people seem plastic to me. As you said "You're so plastic" |
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Re: Plastic
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:47:57 AM AEST
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Intense, poweful. Captivating the essance of many today. Your style carried it along .
Michelle |
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Re: Plastic
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:20:17 PM AEST
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| Yeah, Its so deep....I love it. |
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