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* To the Sea *
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 02:23:39 AM in AEST
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Tossed now and battered
Swept out to sea
She screams into silence
Like a wailing banshee
Moved to a rhythm
That is so hard to hear
She struggles in panic
So she won’t disappear
Waves crest ferocious
Then fall with a sigh
They hold her below
Then lift her up to the sky
Watching and waiting
Held rooted at the shore
He waits and he watches
But he can’t see her anymore
MW 28.02.06
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2006-02-28 02:23:39]
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Re: * To the Sea *
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 05:59:48 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: * To the Sea *
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:38:17 AM AEST
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| loved it, good writing, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: * To the Sea *
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:49:25 AM AEST
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detailed and so very vivid I could almost hear the beating of the ocean and her screams. Incredible write.
Michelle |
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Re: * To the Sea *
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:14:33 PM AEST
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heartbreakingly sad....images are excellent....a very moving write...
hugs n' love nessa |
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