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I Thought.....
Contributed by
OzChick
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 01:51:45 AM in AEST
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LostLove
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I thought I could trust you, that you would be true.
That you’d never hurt me, I thought I knew you.
I gave you my heart right from the start.
Never suspecting, you’d tear it apart.
I was so blind, it came from behind.
This blow to my heart was more than unkind.
What did I do to deserve this from you?
Can you give me a hint? Can you give me a clue?
I thought you were a friend, on which I could depend.
I never imagined that it would end.
I thought I could trust you, that you would be true.
That you’d never hurt me, I thought I knew you.
~~~
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 06:01:57 AM AEST
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| a well expressed poem,good job |
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Re: I Thought.....
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 07:52:15 AM AEST
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the questions left ...seldom any answers...well expressed
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:33:48 AM AEST
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| Great write my friend, being blindsided comes only from selfishness. We are all here for you....Mike |
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Re: I Thought.....
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 10:51:01 AM AEST
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Heartfelt write. Its hard when someone does this to us. Trust is an open thing and when its broken it leaves an open wound. Im so sorry that your hurting and Im here nomatter what.
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 03:41:14 PM AEST
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More than i care 2 mention lol. great write jen
as always simple yet most effective. Hang in there things will get better. Best to you my friend.
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 08:10:47 PM AEST
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Oh this is not good. No one needs that type of surprise, very, very unpleasant. Only thing one can say is, ok.. they put out their full trust and got smacked, and do we not all learn new lessons in life.. there are disappointments in all situations. There is one positive side to this though.. and its great you learned about the distrust in the relationship. Many are in relationships, living alone, alone. I pray a gift of love will be coming your way very soon.
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:44:29 AM AEST
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Very well expressed words indeed. i like the way this just flows you can read it fast and the words just blur into each other. Read outloud the passion of this piece really comes out.
Excellent.
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Re: I Thought.....
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:23:07 PM AEST
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Oh wow yes, have I been blindsided. More times than I would like to count. Only really two but still, I hate counting them. :-)
Yeah, it seems those questions are never answered.
Now the poem itself. It's wonderful. You have a really nice style of writing and I apologize for missing out. I will rectify that situation, Jenny.
It has a very very nice rhyme scheme and flow. You write beautifully.
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Timotheus
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