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Journey
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:10:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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As I age
And leave my youth
I begin to question
And wonder
What was truth
My journey has been
An arduous one
Fraught with strife
And love undone
Was truth the woman
Who fell apart
Or
Was truth the child
Who was strong
From the start
Now I know
That strength was always mine
And
Lasting love has given me
A life most sublime
My journey has been
A passionate one
Filled with the knowledge
I made a difference to some
To continually seek
Is my quest
And I will ceaselessly strive
To do my best
Copyright ©
Leslie
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2006-02-27 23:10:44]
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Re: Journey
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by purplestary on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 11:39:05 PM AEST
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| i really love this write. such a fresh and positive way to look at it. it shows the struggle, yet also the strength to overcome and concure. thank you. |
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Re: Journey
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 09:36:33 AM AEST
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| Great write, it shows true belief in ones self....Mike |
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Re: Journey
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Tuesday, 28th February 2006 @ 04:41:11 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Journey
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 01:20:50 AM AEST
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The write was equisite-
We learn.. what is and how to "love" during our formative years-
It's during this time we learn what nurturing is.
If that lesson is defunct,
we regress back to that, which was never properly
conveyed..and instinctually, try to work it out,
inevitably, as we mature.
So says trial and error.. lol
5 frome me Luv.. I feel ya.
Sincerely..
Billy
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Re: Journey
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 11:06:42 PM AEST
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A fitting tribute to the lessons of life-
3rd stanza's question..most readily answered:
Inherently, it's all good. We learn to love almost immediately from birth-
Every other emotion is incidental.
Live and learn, as it were.
(unfortunately)
Truly-
Billy |
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Re: Journey
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 12:29:05 AM AEST
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I enjoyed the positivity of this piece the first three verses I thought lifes really got to you! then the second half of the poem you turn it all around with a positive slant.
This has been very well thought out indeed.
well done.
J. |
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Re: Journey
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by JGB on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 08:07:31 PM AEST
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If you look to inspire others, then you have me your goal.
Thank you.
Joanna |
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Re: Journey
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 12:21:37 AM AEST
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Such a beautifull, positive write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Journey
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 10:45:00 PM AEST
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Nice introspective to the positive. Very inspiring. Very good!
wabl
KenMoore
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